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What Do You See In Me? by ~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie:

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What do you guys see in me?
I'm broken,
Flawed,
And everything in between.

I hear voices in my head,
I speak without thinking,
Live a messed up life,
And destroy all relationships I've ever had.

So what do you guys see in me?
What do you see in this broken freak?
This flawed creature?
This messed up child?

It can't be for my looks,
Because I know I'm not pretty.

It can't be for my talent,
Because I have none.

It can't be for my love,
Because I don't let it show very much.

It can't be for myself,
Because even I hate me.

So if it's none of these,
Then what is it that makes you want to be with me?
Me,
The freak who doesn't fit in,
Who acts different,
Who has aspirations that differ from the norm.

And since it can't be any of those,
Then what is it?
What do you see in me,
The broken freak,
The flawed creature,
The messed up child?

What do you guys see in me?
©2008 ~ScoutSkullie
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What do you guys see in me?
You know who you are.
Note me and tell me, because I really would love to know.
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~DeschiZap:iconDeschiZap: May 15, 2008, 9:11:31 PM
You're Scout, one of mah friends, and even though I don't know you that well yet, I know I can trust you. c: Feel speshul.
You are awesome, and all your self-esteem issues need to pack their bags and go away. *shakes fist*

--
Ring around the Death Note
a pocket full of apples
Shinigami Shinigami
Kills you dead.
~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie: May 16, 2008, 1:48:36 PM
Aw, thanks Zappy. <3
I was just... Not feeling like I had a purpose on Earth yesterday.

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He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.
~DeschiZap:iconDeschiZap: May 16, 2008, 3:03:45 PM
I used to think everything had a purpose but seagulls.
Then I realized Seagulls clean up teh beaches, so EVERYTHING has a purpose! 8D

--
Ring around the Death Note
a pocket full of apples
Shinigami Shinigami
Kills you dead.
~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie: May 16, 2008, 3:07:25 PM
...Okay then. ._.;
That was a bit odd. xD;

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He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.
~DeschiZap:iconDeschiZap: May 16, 2008, 3:17:14 PM
You expected better?

--
Ring around the Death Note
a pocket full of apples
Shinigami Shinigami
Kills you dead.
~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie: May 16, 2008, 3:20:32 PM
..Not really. xD;

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He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.
~Demolitian:iconDemolitian: May 16, 2008, 6:05:13 PM
Aww, your a great person, Scouty. D:
Nobodies prefect anyway.
AND FACK YOU ARE PRETTY. D:
You're much prettier than me, anyway. xD;

--
'Howl, you fucking animals!'
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:rose:
~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie: May 16, 2008, 6:07:10 PM
NO WAY!
I'm ugly! D;

--
He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.
~Demolitian:iconDemolitian: May 16, 2008, 6:07:35 PM
YOU
ARE
PRETTY
DAMMIT. D:

--
'Howl, you fucking animals!'
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:rose:
~ScoutSkullie:iconScoutSkullie: May 16, 2008, 6:09:00 PM
NO I'M NOT.

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He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.
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